It seems like the more attached you are to a story, the harder it is to put it into words, and it's so frustrating when it just doesn't seem to work. It sounds kind of trite to say this under the circumstances, but good luck. I'm sure you'll succeed in telling the story that you want, but I hope it doesn't drive you too crazy in the interim.

Serious stuff aside: wasn't that waking up thing marvelous? It kind of makes me wish I'd ordered the RE. Ohkura falling asleep on his feet was hilarious, and grumpy!Maru and Ryo being adorably silly and Yasu never sleeping and Hina making an idiot of himself. And Subaru was just...special. Very special. XD

Also, I quite love your hot moment of the day.