your writing has a mature sound & depth <3 So when I was reading I tabbed a handful that I enjoyed & noticed that a couple had really good dialogue and the story was nicely done within a single page. What I mean, is they weren't super long but were strong in story. Also, they both ended without an end, if that makes sense. It was like the story stopped so that another one could pick up where it left off. That's one of the things I like about your writing! That the story ends in a satisfying manner BUT you could pick up where it stopped & continue on. There's so much story in so few lines it's amazing. The flow was steady & again, the dialogue was seamless. The emotional tone was so good too. So good T____T You don't use fandom cliches either and as such it feels real world. You're just a strong storyteller <3 and when I checked to see who you liked to write it made it easier to pick xD
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2011-09-25 11:37 pm (UTC)wellll~
your writing has a mature sound & depth <3 So when I was reading I tabbed a handful that I enjoyed & noticed that a couple had really good dialogue and the story was nicely done within a single page. What I mean, is they weren't super long but were strong in story. Also, they both ended without an end, if that makes sense. It was like the story stopped so that another one could pick up where it left off. That's one of the things I like about your writing! That the story ends in a satisfying manner BUT you could pick up where it stopped & continue on. There's so much story in so few lines it's amazing. The flow was steady & again, the dialogue was seamless. The emotional tone was so good too. So good T____T
You don't use fandom cliches either and as such it feels real world. You're just a strong storyteller <3 and when I checked to see who you liked to write it made it easier to pick xD