I'm slow and just got around to reading this (or at least reading it in a way that involves actually retaining anything), but I still wanted to comment.
It's...Yoko/Ohkura isn't a pairing I ever really got, but somehow you make it work here. It's adorable, but in a way that I can imagine Yoko and Ohkura being (when neither of them is exactly the sappy type). And I love little details like the six other guys in the group. ♥
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Date: 2008-06-15 06:11 am (UTC)It's...Yoko/Ohkura isn't a pairing I ever really got, but somehow you make it work here. It's adorable, but in a way that I can imagine Yoko and Ohkura being (when neither of them is exactly the sappy type). And I love little details like the six other guys in the group. ♥