I love how Massu's totally blasé about it and doesn't question that his old grandmother could climb up and put the key in a tree somewhere (whereas Ryo immediately goes "Umm, what?"). I can never figure out how I think Massu should be written, but I definitely like your version.
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Date: 2008-04-27 10:19 pm (UTC)