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I intended this to be a hundred words. No one in my head listens to me anymore. XD


Title: Theme
Pairing: Yoko/Ohkura
Word Count: 895
Rating: PG-13

Yoko’s not difficult to find while he’s going through a game obsession. The music from his ubiquitous PSP always travels at least twelve feet in all directions. So, after Ohkura walks down the beach and through the field without luck, he returns to the ryokan, where from the bottom of the path he can already hear the battle sounds of Monster Hunter.

Yoko is in the room he’s sharing with Hina and Maru, cross-legged on his crumpled futon in pale blue shorts and a black T-shirt. His hair is a scruffy mess, pillow-beaten and finger-combed, and it’s clear just from that that he hasn’t been to the beach with Yasu and Maru or played soccer with Subaru, Ryo and Hina. Instead, he’s by himself in the shade of his room, relaxing in his own way.

Ohkura steps over Hina’s duffel bag and crouches next to Yoko.

He watches a dinosaur tromp up beside Yoko’s sprinting character and let out a roar that makes the PSP vibrate.

“Sit,” Yoko says. “Shh.”

Ohkura sits with his legs straight out in front of him, leaning his weight back on his hands. He doesn’t mind waiting. He simply watches Yoko’s face, bathed in the flickering glow of changing color on the screen. Yoko glances sideways at him for half a second, but he doesn’t seem to mind, judging by his small, shy grin.

Ohkura finds himself smiling. The circles under Yoko’s eyes are still dark – and they’ll stay dark as long as Yoko consistently stays up until dawn hunched over his video games – but somehow, he also looks well-rested. His body is relaxed, his eyes clear.

Without hesitating, because this is their break without cameras and they’re not meant to think about sordid details like implications, Ohkura rests his head on Yoko’s shoulder. Not under the pretense of watching the game – he shuts his eyes as soon as Yoko’s shoulder warms his cheek. He just wants to be there.

Seven minutes later, Yoko puts the PSP aside.

“You asleep?”

Keeping his eyes closed, Ohkura says, “No.”

They stay like that, quiet, listening for and sometimes hearing shouts from Hina and hollering from Subaru.

“Last night – ”

“Nuh uh,” Yoko says. “No drama talk.”

Ohkura grins sheepishly. “Sorry.” He turns his face into Yoko’s neck and improvises a kiss while he’s there.

“It should just be what it is,” Yoko says.

“Mm.” Ohkura grazes Yoko’s back with his fingertips. “Okay.”

Yoko catches his hand and, after a moment of stillness during which he seems lost, pulls Ohkura’s arm around his waist so he can splay Ohkura’s fingers on his thigh. When Ohkura feels the heat of Yoko’s skin under his palm, he opens his eyes and gives Yoko an amused look. Oblivious, Yoko puts his hand over Ohkura’s, placing his fingers in the spaces between Ohkura’s.

Peacock,” Yoko says proudly in English.

Ohkura snorts into a surprised chuckle.

Yoko repeats, “Cock,” and sends Ohkura into a short fit.

When Ohkura calms down, he senses Yoko looking at him and turns his head on Yoko’s shoulder to stare straight up back at him. The expression on Yoko’s face surprises him, rare and sincere as it is. Ohkura feels his heart climb up into his throat at the thought that a look like that could actually be meant for him.

Then Yoko says, “I want to keep you,” with a slight tremble in his voice.

Ohkura closes his eyes again. “Don’t kid yourself,” he murmurs into Yoko’s warm shirt sleeve, “you’re mine.”

Even if he was expecting to end up on his back for that, he expected Yoko’s familiar tickling ambush, not – not –

Yoko kisses him once, lightly, softly, bent over on his knees with Ohkura’s face between his hands. After his initial surprise wanes, Ohkura fans all of his fingers through Yoko’s hair to gently hold the back of his neck.

“Brat,” Yoko murmurs.

Ohkura grins. Sticks his tongue out.

Yoko says, “Bad strategy,” and orally demonstrates for Ohkura how it can be used against him.

Centimeters away, sunlight pours in through the open sliding door leading to the porch. As Yoko changes position to get closer, his elbow dips into the light. It’s only a quick taste, though, before Yoko draws it back.

Once Yoko is actually lying on top of him, Ohkura is struck dumb. The heat and weight are both familiar, as is the sound of Yoko’s nervous quick breathing.

But.

“What about when we go back?”

Yoko answers him immediately, “What about it? There’re five other guys in the group for the fans.”

“Six,” Ohkura corrects him quietly.

“Yeah, six,” Yoko smiles. “So they lose out on me. Their loss.”

Ohkura responds to the jab with a sour twist of his mouth. Yoko giggles.

“Besides,” he continues, “we won’t be obnoxious or obvious about it. It’s not like I’m going to start writing sex scenes for us into Eito skits.”

Ohkura grins.

“You want me to try, don’t you?”

Ohkura nods.

Yoko makes a face. “You think you have influence because you’re sleeping with the writer?”

Ohkura nods. Stops.

Yoko coughs. Says, “Would you, ah. Wanna sleep with the writer?”

Ohkura nods, slow and deliberate, his fingers tightening on Yoko’s neck. When Yoko exhales, Ohkura can feel his heartbeat strong and rapid underneath his fingers.

Into Yoko’s mouth, he whispers, “Kimi,” and feels the sunlight starting to warm his hands.

Date: 2008-06-12 07:28 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] nicocoer.livejournal.com
. . . Wow. ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2008-06-13 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
♥ Thank you!

Date: 2008-06-12 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roadwaffle.livejournal.com
totally sweet :)
I'm sorry it's far too early for a better comment xD But the fic was a nice way to start the day.
I really like your style :)

Date: 2008-06-13 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
♥♥♥ So sweet of you to say, love. :) Thank you.

Date: 2008-06-12 08:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epicwaters.livejournal.com
my face hurts from the grin stuck to my face. the way you describe things.. seriously.. I'm jealous XD you're making me think of wacky pairings. I'm liking it :D

this was really. I could hear cicadas &hearts

Date: 2008-06-13 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
♥♥♥!!! THE WACKY PAIRINGS CAN BE SURPRISINGLY FUN. Hehe!

Thank you for commenting, love. :)

Date: 2008-06-12 09:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kenaressa.livejournal.com
*pokepoke* It's your turn~ ^___^


no, of course I'm not anxious to find out what happens next, why do you ask?

Date: 2008-06-13 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Hee, sorry, love. I saw, but I got caught up in stories and my play. I'll write the next part later. :)

Date: 2008-06-12 09:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kenaressa.livejournal.com
Also, this is really cute and sweet and perfect (and I don't really ship them at all, how do you manage to make it work? >_>;)

Date: 2008-06-13 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you. :) ♥♥♥ I just tell it the way I see it in my head. Hehe.

Date: 2008-06-12 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] impynymph.livejournal.com
lkfskldfjklsfda OMG CUTE!!

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ugh. You are amazing, btw! ♥♥♥♥!!!!!!!

Date: 2008-06-13 04:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Hehe! Thank you very much! ♥♥♥!

Date: 2008-06-12 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corimari.livejournal.com
I LOVE THIS PAIRING WHY DOES NO ONE WRITE IT DDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

totally made my morning with yoko saying COCK IN ENGLISH LKAjf;lkasjd;foiajsd;foklajsdfoi;asdlfkajsdf

yes.
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Date: 2008-06-12 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yum-gums.livejournal.com
weeeeeee...i like it! it's short and sweet!! >___<
i love this pairing, but there are a only a few fics of this pairing. Hope you'd write more. XD

Date: 2008-06-13 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
♥♥♥! Thank you! I plan to! :)

Date: 2008-06-12 01:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rainymemories.livejournal.com
that was amazing. :) yoko/ohkura is amazing, although i do think (more like hope in my wildest dreams) yoko really should start writing sex scenes into the eito ranger skits, :D

Date: 2008-06-12 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayumwu.livejournal.com
ROFLMAO DON'T LET YOUR PERVY SIDE SHOW! XD

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Date: 2008-06-12 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ununoriginal.livejournal.com
ur writing jus leaves me in paroxysms of breathlessness. i mean, like, seriously. BREATHLESS. and i've never really considered yoko/ohkura before, and now i will jus not be able to stop thinking about this pairing and it's all cuz of u!

u draw out the visuals so strongly tat i can almost see them for real :) and the timing and pace is jus spot-on. plus some of the amazingly random things tat spout from yoko's mouth and the crackish humour and the exquisite ending... i swear, u could write any pairing and prob make me like it ^_~

Date: 2008-06-13 04:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
!!! ♥♥♥♥!!!

This is such a wonderful thing to read. Thank you. I'm really touched. :)

Date: 2008-06-12 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pixisity.livejournal.com
My story I was writing for you went bye-bye *sadface* (actually I'm still crying *big baby* because my desktop appears to have died, taking everything with it...) I loved this story tho - so much better than the one I was writing.

*hugs*

Date: 2008-06-13 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Aww! I didn't know you were writing something for me! ♥♥♥! You're so sweet! The thought is enough to make me smile. :) I'm sorry about your hard drive, love. ♥ My computer died too around this time last year and I lost a lot of plays and stories and pictures and blah. Awful, terrible thing to go through. ♥♥♥

Date: 2008-06-12 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] airairo.livejournal.com
COCK ♥

Omg I really love this. *_* This is a sorely underwritten pairing. I love how this is so quiet and relaxed, but also a sweet and a little tentative. And "No drama talk"! And "Kimi" will always make me swoon. XD This is so great, Kya!!! ♥♥♥

Date: 2008-06-13 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
COCK INDEED. ♥

♥♥♥♥! So happy you enjoyed, love! :D They make me happy. :D

Date: 2008-06-12 04:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] spurious.livejournal.com
omg this is such a happy. ♥

Date: 2008-06-13 04:28 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-06-12 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayumwu.livejournal.com
YokoKura has always been my secret guilty pleasure. Imagine my surprise when someone wrote it. \8D!

Thank you. XD ^^;v

Date: 2008-06-13 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Aw, be proud of the Yoko/Ohkura love! They're really adorable together. My favorite moment with the two of them is during the SC where they're playing the improv game and Ohkura lets Yoko raise his hand like, four times, and tolerates it all with this long-suffering, why-am-I-doing-this smile. XD

♥ Thank you for commenting!

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From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
*flail*

My heart's like, caught in my throat somewhere. This tingly warm feeling lsdkfaj flail.

I'M GOING TO GIVE YOU A PAIRING TO "DRABBLE" LATE LATE AT NIGHT MORE OFTEN. AND ITS TOTALLY GOING TO BE YOKOKURA AGAIN PROMISE!!!!!!! AUGH. Kya. This just. *_* My heart. *_* Its like. You write them like sunlight. *_* So easy and comfortable and warm.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

BE MINE.

AND ALWAYS. ALWAYS. WRITE YOKOKURA.
ALWAYS. LKSJDFLKSDJFLKSDFJ FLAIL.
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
EEE!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!

OMG IS THAT THE PICTURE IN YOUR ICON? THAT'S SO INCOMPREHENSIBLY ADORABLE. WNEKJWNEWN YOKO LOVES ALL OF HIS LITTLE BROTHERS OMG.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!!

FEEL FREE TO ALWAYS GIVE ME YOKO/OHKURA PROMPTS. I'VE FOUND I KIND OF ADORE THEM AS A PAIRING.

Date: 2008-06-12 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hungry-worm.livejournal.com
:D Reading this after a tiresome work day made me really happy and smiley. Thank you!

Date: 2008-06-13 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Aww, I'm glad. ♥ Hope you're better rested now!

Date: 2008-06-12 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mojolove.livejournal.com
wow. HOT!HOT!HOT! here.. have all the hearts in the world. ♥♥♥♥♥ this is the first time i've read yokokura and it is a great first time! :D

Date: 2008-06-13 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
HEARTS FOR YOU, TOO: ♥♥♥♥♥! :D Thank you!

Date: 2008-06-12 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suikascented.livejournal.com
Even though I don't ship this pairing, I really loved this fic. It was as though I could feel in my fingertips the warmth of the sun, even if it's already pitch black out here. ...I'm kind of stalking you now =D?

Date: 2008-06-13 04:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
♥ Thank you very much! I'm happy that it had an effect like that on you. :)

(Stalk away. I enjoy your comments! ♥)

Date: 2008-06-12 11:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saaski-moql.livejournal.com
This was the sweetest, cutest-with-humor thing in the world and I want to love it forever. Because D'AAAWWW. *wiffles*

Date: 2008-06-13 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
♥♥♥!!! Thank you, sweetheart! :D

Date: 2008-06-13 12:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trivialaffair.livejournal.com
Honestly, I can't imagine Yoko and Ohkura together, but you make it work. I really like this. It was so sweet. :D

Date: 2008-06-13 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Hee, thank you! ♥

Date: 2008-06-13 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bellemainec.livejournal.com
adorable and sweet, and lovely. I really liked the pacing, it was gentle and soft, and I loved the little details like the warming of Ohkura's cheek against Yoko's shoulder. very well done :)

Date: 2008-06-13 04:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
♥ Thank you very much! I love hearing the specific things people enjoyed. :)

Date: 2008-06-15 06:11 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ilanala
I'm slow and just got around to reading this (or at least reading it in a way that involves actually retaining anything), but I still wanted to comment.

It's...Yoko/Ohkura isn't a pairing I ever really got, but somehow you make it work here. It's adorable, but in a way that I can imagine Yoko and Ohkura being (when neither of them is exactly the sappy type). And I love little details like the six other guys in the group. ♥

Date: 2008-06-16 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Always feel free to comment! It's always baffled me why there seems to be an expiration date on commenting to fics. I always want to read feedback!

It's like a late Christmas present. :D

♥ I'm glad that you enjoyed it, especially the characterization and their dynamic. :)

Date: 2011-05-26 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xxcloud9.livejournal.com
I was debating really hard about adding a comment to this cus I'm sooooo late and I don't wanna spam your inbox or anything, but then this was sooooo good that I couldn't just not. And then I read your last reply and took it as a sign xD.

This story made butterflies dance in my tummy. It was so warm and quiet but clear and real.
Yoko <3.

Date: 2011-05-26 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkpapyrus.livejournal.com
Spam strongly encouraged. ;) I love getting feedback on fics aaaaaallllll the time! Someone left a comment a few months ago on a fic I wrote back in 2005 and reading it was one of the brightest points of my day. So, yes, if you ever feel like leaving feedback, know that it'll be very much appreciated and enjoyed. ♥!

:D:D:D Hurrah butterflies! They were such an unexpectedly warm pairing to write. Quickly became one of my three favorite Eito pairings (along with Subassan and Hina/Yoko).

I'm glad you seem to be enjoying your stalking experience! ;)

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